Pain

Tue, 10/30/2012 - 22:45 -- Yami777

Location

17603
United States
40° 0' 52.056" N, 76° 19' 44.3784" W

You don't understand the way i'm feeling,
the thoughts in my head the deep brutal pain;
Can mo longer stand it has me kneeling;
Tears fall as it all takes place in the rain.
The dark black sky and the cold wet water,
'cuase of biological creator;
Do you consider me as a daughter?
Knew this would happen sooner or later,
The unspoken hints, the multiple lies,
the lack of support as it has been shown,
it hurts my heart everytime that it cries,
just to know true love from you is unknown.
Yes i will be your daughter forever,
Yet proven right that you'll love me never..

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