Wouldn't You

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wouldn't you rather win, would you rather lose 

succeed than fail 

rise above than get left behind

wouldn't you rather love 

and not be hurt 

laugh and not not be weary 

cry but tears of joy 

be happy without sadness

creeping around the corner 

wouldn't you rather be rich than poverty 

stricken 

quiet than to voice most opinions 

wouldn't you rather be positive than let negative 

overwhelm you 

it all a choice 

individual principality 

the way life is 

without questions, without definite 

nothing is concrete until you add 

the ingredients. 

 

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