An Angel's been Released

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11203
United States
40° 39' 5.7168" N, 73° 55' 58.9548" W
11203
United States
40° 39' 5.7168" N, 73° 55' 58.9548" W
As I look into the sky
I notice the worldly light is different.
It's something like a twinkle, but there's something else in it.
 
As I walk into the open lands
I feel a warmth in the air
A comforting sensation
As if someone was still there
 
As I listen to the ocean breeze
I hear a bit of laughter
A reminder of happiness
That'll still be there after
 
As I sit alone below a tree
I feel a force around me
A loving feeling in my soul
Telling me to be free
 
As I think upon life today
And wonder what couldve been
I sit back and say to myself
"An angel's been released"
 
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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

As i think upon life today
And wonder what couldve been
I sit back and say to myself
"An angel's been released"

these lines in this poem tells it

intimate and honest poem-angels are sent from god to guide and heal you

great job and keep writing

 

wordiotter

I viewed it and thought it was beautiful!  Too bad the view counter is broken because I'm sure many people have enjoyed this!

Jennakr8

This poem is really pretty! I love the imagery, and emotion you worked into it.

happinessforever

Wonderful and beautiful poem!  The expression and emotion is very evident in this, overflowing the heart and mind.

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