But Are You Living?

The line between death and life is thin

As fragile onion-paper skin

And seemingly sturdy, be as it may

There’s always a path open to decay

You claim to live, and yet you’re down

Buried way deep in a hole in the ground

Rotting away, though your heart still beats

Life eludes your sad body; Death eats.

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