Vapour

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77095
United States
29° 54' 38.9916" N, 95° 39' 22.7232" W

As soon as
you walk out
of my line of sight,
you turn to vapor
in my mind;
all of your wet particles
sadly slosh against my occipital lobe
like waves to an empty shore

But then my eyes grab hold of you again-
you materialize
and plant the feet of your nasty, dry form
on my brain’s indentions-
and suddenly, you are real once more

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