Poems from seabreeze13
Hola fellow poets, I'm Seabreeze :)
As a sophmore in high school right now, I'm just trying to figure everything out (life, drama, why my favorite Chinese place won't deliver) and a lot of that affects my writing.
Please comment! Critique is wanted, no, extremely NEEDED. Thanks :)
An unholy attraction,
That leaves me torn apart at the seams.
Each word, each glance,
Slowly shreds the delicate stitching,
Holding me...
You say you're in a funhouse,
With all the not-so-fun distorted mirrors,
The lying, twisted versions of the reflections they hold.
I see...