Poems from bewhoUR

Hi, I'm a new poet who'd really love to get feedback on her work so I would love to get some advice from you guys. Thanks
Its sitting in the middle Of a rustic forest day by day Dead leaves suround it Hardly no sound comes out of it   Vines hug everything...
  The things that we see The secrets we keep The puzzles I solve are the ones inside me   Why try and figure out whats around us When we...
A flashlight sat next to candle In a dark night and someone once asked Which one shined bright   Well said the person Sitting real near...
  The sky is blue though it seems grey May we always know what holds the day   The stars are bright The moon is light Shall we always see...