you're still here

I saw you in my dream

Sitting there looking so young and healthy

Your peppered beard and lucious gray hair

Seeing you made me sad

Sad you're not here

But I know you're on a visit

To see how im doing

And I love and I miss you

So please keep on visiting 

And see how im doing 

Because I need you here to help me with coping 

This poem is about: 
Me
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thermitus18

hey nice not sure if your still doing poems

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