Your forceful love

All I was looking forward to, you;

War made you different,

Now the war is between us two.

What is going to happen to our children?

Crying myself to sleep has become the new norm.

Never imagine myself in this place;

Now our marriage I mourn.

Connecting with you feels like walking through a maze.

Your anger reflected on my babys skin.

That is what made me realize,

How long it has been;

And I have to recognize 

We do not need you,

But it is to late to press undo.

 

 

 

This poem is about: 
My family
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DOYIN TRACEY

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You brought me to tears....like you walked right into my bosom and touched my heart...you communicate a certain feeling till the reader feels that feeling. I hear you! I feel you!

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