young man dreaming

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34° 22' 3.7812" N, 118° 28' 28.9812" W

(poems go here) i got a story i like to share
about a kid whose skills don't compare
hard working young man has big plans
he wants to make it big
says he he gong works hard and the rest
he going to leave in gods hands
see him try catch the bus
has to wake up early
his shift starts at seven thirty
on the ride there he thinks about the past
reminisces about life he doesn't fear he doesn't worry
heart filled with love mind filled with hope
he likes to stay postive
he influenced by people who work hard
like his parents
mom tells him read and study so you can become somthing
dad tells him work hard not waist time
what we dont do today is time we dont get back
use it wisely
those were his fathers words
those words leave the young man thinking
what a world it never stops spinning
hes going to make it one day
after that day comes hes never going to stop winning .

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