You dont know who you are

I hate people who fancy themselves assured,

like they know who they are

what they act like 

what they look like

they sound so so sure

I hate them

you dont know a thing about yourself or the others around you 

you barely notice how somone holds their head upon their shoulders

like a crown?

or a burden?

or a treasure?

but you cant take the time of day to

to wrapped up in the cloth warm and false of your surety

truely no one knows who they are and neither do others

no matter how unbiased

it is never true never false

and that is the human nature

to "know" who you are

when we are all drowning in the pit that is ignorance-cc.

This poem is about: 
My country
Our world

Comments

RichardGoodew

This helped me exapnd upon my own being and not of self but of unity as one, we must remember who we are and what we can do to help others. we get used to chasing a 9 -5 or even hobbys to keep us busy. before technology was so invaise and commone people asked each other how they were doing. now it seems people lack the feeling and just go on impulse. instead we need to connect and talk to each other. you daily path will reveiial so many options to grow and change or simploy stay the same. the more we connect the more god feels our imagie regrouping with those that matter and who were supposed to be "tribe / family / as one"

Chloe999

That is exactly what I was trying to communicate in this poem how allianted we are from eachother 

and how well we think we know ourselves based on hobbies and activities and not ourselves or how we treat others 

 

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