You Are Noticed

Still, starry, silent...

Midnight...

Unnoticed, forgotten...

Coming and going without a hello or goodbye.

Meteorite crashes providing Today's talk.

Midnight, ashamed of the gossip, produces a falling star...

Silence follows the miraculous show--

Again unnoticed, forgotten.

Knowing, the Most Important One noticed the act. 

Midnight contentedly returns to still, starry, silence.

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