You and I

Tue, 12/31/2013 - 18:31 -- M_Doyle

We sink together, you and I.

Slow, slow, quick

does the water rise

above our heads.

Next to me 

you grew ever so still.

Out of breath,

out of time,

we sank together,

you

and 

I.

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