Yearning for God

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21037
United States
38° 55' 24.9528" N, 76° 33' 37.3788" W

I could not imagine life without you;
Though I never see you, I know your still there.
In my heart I can feel you,
My soul aches for your loving care.

My mind wanders your direction ever-so-often,
My body longs for your touch.
But when I see you have written me so much,
My hearts callused Shell starts to soften.

Comments

raymond.crosley

Reading Habakkuk and how he was yearning to understand God and why he works the way he does. I'd suggest reading Habakkuk 1,

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nice job is writing this piece
this is one of the ways to yearn for god
do you have other poems? keep wriiting
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raymond.crosley

I wrote it last summer while walking on the beach at night

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