Winter
Wondering if they'll ever see eachother again.
Initcal thought was I will see you again
Never did that happen
They went there seperate ways
Ever to see eachother again
Remembering all the good memorys they had and continous on with there day.
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Lulu C
The concept that this poem presents is an oldie but a goodie- using winter as a metaphor for something fading or going away. I really like the way you ended it, with them not sticking with the sadness. People letting go isn't something I see very often in poetry. My only real critiques would be that the spelling errors sort of threw me out of the mood. If those were corrected, I think this would be a really good poem!