Will You Ever Know?

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46120
United States
39° 30' 16.8192" N, 86° 48' 7.0092" W

Two people in love
Such a beautiful thing.
Like the voices and laughter,
And the songs that we sing.
But you changed your mind
Like that old cliche
"It's not you, it's me,"
And you threw it away.
If it wasn't my fault,
Then what went wrong?
I try to understand.
I try to stay strong.
Try as I might,
I still feel blue.
Will you ever know
How much I care about you?

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