Who I was before

Who was I before I was attacked?

I was a nice guy who looked on the bright side of things.

Never saw nothing wrong with the world.

Till one day I saw a guy beating some other guy 

I stepped in

I wish I did not

I spent all my summer in intensive care unit healing

All because he stabbed me in the ribs and punctured a lung

Now I can't trust anyone at all

I think of one person now 

Me!

And now I write Poems to lash out!!

Comments

prokilz

Keep writing and recognize that we are all one. Even the person that stabbed you.. he's just ignorant. You can open your mind 

and be above the anger. Your happiness should not be up to some bogus person stabbing you. 

km112435

Dude I lost my entire summer because of him

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