"Who I can't Live Without", "Deserted Island"

Could it really be true

I am now truly lost and without you

So this nightmare becomes a reality

To which not even you can set me free

Though you did everything else

Before even thinking of yourself

Whether need or want it may be

If for me you always helped me see

The gift of putting thee before me

For you with me now is my only plea

Alone on this vast place

With you I have no trace

You would be the one I choose to bother

For you I proudly call mother

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