Whisper~

Tue, 01/01/2013 - 04:53 -- Aqua

Location

75850
Pakistan

Echo voice
Talking eyes
Choke up quite

Murmuring sound
Feeling bound
Calling word
No-one heard

Ponderous noise
Ego yikes
Crack up cries.

Comments

Aqua

Hi, I am Areeba Azeem from Pakistan .Hope you guys enjoy reading my Poem :)

Aqua

Hope you like it.

jwiener

Great poem! I love how it is simple, but really paints a picture of people and nature. Interested in writing more about nature and your surroundings or even writing a haiku? Check out "Writing Tips" in the "Resources" section!

Aqua

Hmm i will do my level best :)

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