What's the point?

Tue, 09/25/2018 - 12:00 -- ngopes

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Brazil

When you fall,

You get back up, 

Even one thousand times.

How many times do you fall in life?

Until you'll want to get up?

When you are in death bed,

Why do you give up?

Would you get up this time,

and challenge life,

that my time hasn't come yet.

When your curtain comes down,

your time’s up.

everything in life is give and take,

but when it comes to death,

you have no choice.

After all this,

what is the point ?

You think that you've lived,

All the days of your life,

but,

What good  life is if,

you appear to suffer  most,

during your last hours.

 

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