"What's Controlling Yours ?" ... A Poem written by Big Virge 14/7/2008

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United Kingdom

These Days It's CLEAR That Mind Control Is On A Roll ... !!!
Because LOST Souls Now Live In ... "FEAR" ... !!!!!

FEAR of THIS And FEAR of THAT ... !!!
FEAR of Thinking They've Been TRAPPED ... !!!

Most Minds Now Find Themselves In ... "Binds" ...
That Are Designed To ... "KEEP Them BLIND" ... !!!!

Blind To Thoughts EXPOSING FRAUDS ...
Like Bogus Wars On Foreign Shores ...

Most Minds It Seems Are Getting WEAK ... !!!
And Choose To SLEEP Like DORMANT Breeds of Human Beings ... !!!

So The Question Is ...... ?

... " What CONTROLS Yours " ... ???

A Pair of Lips That OPENS Doors ...
Or Those That SPLIT Because They're Whores ... ?!?

See Many Slip Because They're QUICK ...
To Sex A Chick Who's QUICK To LICK ...
ANY PRICK Named Dick And Have His Kid ... !?!

Because They Know Their DIRTY Hole ...
CANNOT Control The Mind of A Bloke Who CAN'T SAY No ... !!!

You See ... That's The Way The Story Goes ...
When You LACK CONTROL Around PROFESSIONAL Ho's ... !!!!!

In Some It's The Past That's Marked Their Card ... !!!
Because A Person They LOVED CLEARLY BROKE Their Heart ... !!!

But ACTING TOUGH Is NOT The Stuff That Helps You Grow ... !!!
Beyond ............................................... What CONTROLS ... !!!!!

It's Tough I Know To Let Things Go .............................................................
Things From The Past That Have HIT You HARD ... !!!!

ESPECIALLY When You Tried Your BEST ...
To Do What's Right And Be ... " DIGNIFIED " ...

ANGER You Hold KEEPS You CONTROLLED ...
And UNABLE To Then Pass GO And .... Old PAIN Road ... !!!!!

FREE UP Yourself ... Otherwise GET HELP ... !!!!!

Knowledge of Self And Cards You've Dealt ...

IMPROVE Your Chance of Being SMART ...
And Letting PAIN ... Just DRIFT AWAY .....................................................­...........................

It's A FOOL Who Displays IGNORANT Ways ... !!!
Because of FEARS They KEEP Like EARS ... !!!
Next To Their Brain Driving Them INSANE ... !!!!!

Because They Know When The TRUTH Unfolds .......................
That Lies That HOLD Will BETRAY Their Soul ...
Because They're Meek And CLEARLY Weak ... !!!!!
Because of LIES They Choose To KEEP ... !!!

FEAR It Seems ... of Being ALONE ...
Also CONTROLS ... BOTH Young And Old ... !!!
To The Point Where Some Choose To ... " Run Their Gums " ... !!!

About Men Like ME ...

... "You're MILITANT Virge, and you go too far !"

Are Of Course The Words Some Choose To Impart ...
Which I Guess Is Because I DON'T Dwell In The Past ... !!!

Is It Me Whose Lost And CONTROLLED Like DARTH ... ?!?

Because of ANGER Felt From The Cards I've Dealt ... !!!
Well My Answer Is ...... NO ...... !!!

I DON'T Do Coc' So Am NOT Controlled By Chemical Dope ... !!!!
Or Controlled By HATE Because of My Race ...
Or Because of My Weight So What Ya' Gonna Say ... ?

... " What controls Big V !?! " ...

.... NOT A GOD DAMNED Thing .... !!!
But My Wish To Be FREE Like My Poetry ... !!!

There Are A Few Controls That Are Now IMPOSED ...
To Which I'll Abide ... But Here Is WHY ... !!!

Because of PEOPLE LIKE YOU ...
Who Choose To ABUSE The Rules of The Game ... !!!
DON'T Apportion Blame And Then Aim It MY WAY ... !!!
When What You Say ... PROVES You're NOT STRaigHt ... !!!!

STRAIGHT With YOURSELF ...
About The Cards You've Dealt That Affect Your Health ... !!!!!

I'm NOT The Type To Say ... " I Told You So " ... !!!

I'm The Type of Guy To Let You KNOW ...
About How I Feel So I ... " Keep It REAL " ... !!!

Well ... REALER Than Fools Who Choose To ABUSE ... !!!
Those Dealing In TRUTH Because They REFUSE To Look In The MIRROR ...

Like Michael Said ....

Well When You Do You Should Just ... Simmer .....................
And CONTROL Your Head ...

NO Drugs Or Thugs or Thoughts of Love ...
Or Being Alone Should EVER CONTROL ...

CLEAR Thinking ..... NO ... !!!!!

It's Worked For Me No Matter What I've Seen ... !!!

IGNORANT Women ... IGNORANT Men ...
Loss of Life And YES ... " Pain and Strife " ... !!!!!

But Throughout These Times My STRENGTH of MIND ...
Has Kept Me PRIMED To Do What's WISE ...
And NOT ACCEPT New Laws That Want ...

..... " CONTROL of THOUGHT " ..... !!!

Because These Laws Are FLAWED .... !!!

In This I Am ... QUITE SURE ... !!!!!!

So The Question I Now ... " Court " ...

Is .............

... " What's Controlling YOURS ? " ...

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