What would you change

Change, something we want but don't know how

Improving our society will make it turn into an innovative wow

Basics worry about the latest hairstyles and trends

While innovators create something that won't have a possible end

From time and time, we get older and care less

Upon simple things that bring a joyful bliss

being brainwashed by basic high definition device

Without realizing something pleasurable takes away something nice

Waiting in long lines for the latest shoes to drop

Instead of trying to work hard and aim at the top

Trying to make sure you're ther to get them first

Not even thinking someone who needs thirst

Some get laughed at or the type of clothes we wear

Standing in the middle while people laugh and stare

Brand name clothing revolves through our mind

Thinking but not hard enough about what we try to find

Parents struggle just to get their kids what they want

So they'll enjoy the things they'll love and flaunt

Making sure they're happy and don't split apart

Turning a tiny bundle of joy into a never-ending start

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Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerfully expressed! Truly powerful! Keep sharing keep sharing! The world needs your expression! Keep sharing your life your mind your heart! 

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