What Would I Change?

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What would I change, you ask me?

I dont even know where to start,

Theres no much pain, curruption, hurt,

drama is all i see.

Through it all, i think there's one issue that biggest,

it cant be denied,

despite the poverty, the hunger, and the violence,

its greed that pulls the trigger.

If we could take a step outside ourselves,

maybe there'd be hope.

Treat of others like we would treat our mothers

and rethink the meaning of wealth.

To think of this world filled with selfless people,

what a beautiful life,

it

would

be.

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