What would come of you dying


United States
30° 37' 50.2968" N, 85° 35' 23.3844" W

What is the meaning of life
does it mean walking through every day with strife
and in the end taking ones own life?

Walking in an empty shell
having your feelings swell
without any quell?

Perhaps its the tinge of lies
and awkward byes
leaving you with no ties?

If death is what you were to caught
is it worth the eternal silence that you sought
your loved ones sorrows that you bought?

With your death you would bound
the damnation of everyone around
without any sound

The people would follow
and swallow their sorrow
to the edge of tomorrow

where your soul lies
with no ties
with the death of awkward byes

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