What ticks me!

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The way you walk, the way you talk, the way you same my name.

Like venom on the tip of your tongue spitting every word in vain

YOU tick me

The smile of a goddess, the heart of a king, and a voice that makes me plea

Eyes as blue as the sky, hair soft as a bunny, and a want to be with me

The glow in your essance and the shine in your eyes

Its safe to say you are my life!

Its you my love, that ticks me!

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