What I would change

Mon, 03/31/2014 - 00:54 -- PVSMP

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I would change one thing in the world you see

Yea, theres one thing I'd definitely change and it would be... me

I would become a better person and carry out all good duties

Help those who are helpless and in poverty

Carry a lot of responsibility

And help all expand their knowledge as wide as the sea

While being the best i can be

Others will follow and see

That  I am doing this for you and me

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