We Have It Good

An abomination appreciates everything it has,
but a human being born on the right path
complains about everything that had.
If only they could see what is so precious they have,
before they become so reckless and erase everything from God's lab.

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Mafi Grey

Please comment as much as you can. It motivates me to write, when i have an audience behind me. Thanks

Bonesgibson93

This is really good. Try to make one that's a little longer :).

Mafi Grey

That's just one of the many poems I have. I got some longer ones too, but I like making them short sometimes. Thanks

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