The wait is worth it

 

Do we ever really know of true love?

How love comes about is different for all,

Some as brilliantly peaceful as a dove,

Or as rough and deep as a waterfall.

 

Love can cause such a complicated mess,

It causes the heart to skip in the chest,

Along with much anxiety and stress,

But still sends those without it on a quest. 

 

Although, this does not occur overnight, 

Love can bring an irascible joy,

This wonderful feeling is worth the fight,

All because of your special girl or boy. 

 

This love is a feeling felt together,

Something that will truly last forever.

 

Comments

Joelsoul22

Very nice poem it well written the 3 Quatrains and the cuplet at the end are brilliant. The rhyme scheme is brilliant but for some reason i think it doesn't flow as well as it well as it could've. I almost think you are forcing a rhyme pattern on this poem. i know most of your poems have the rhyme scheme, maybe try to branch out.

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