"The Vow for Life"

Mon, 11/09/2015 - 02:17 -- BrianJ

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BrianJ

The wise stand tall, we don't salute, we hale;

While the old goes in, the young prevailes;

Tempers are short, blood veins swell;

Take it to the heart, or parish in Hell;

Voices from the dark, you hear in your mind;

It's the brotherhood in me that makes me shine;

I can't turn my back, that's not what they teach;

It's to live or die, or to rest in Peace.

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