venus through my morning window


United States
44° 27' 39.1644" N, 69° 2' 50.8416" W

venus has been moving south each day
on her rise above the trees,
but soon she will stop, and turn,
and retrace her steps,
and move north again,
and tell the bare branches
to get dressed up again,
in their best green fineries.


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