Vacation

Location

When going on a trip,

Here are the places you should visit.

The lakes of Michigan wide and cool,

Then head to Minnesota and swim in a large pool.

Next go to Chicago and get a deep dish pizza,

Too bad, no time to see the mona Lisa.

Then go to the Dakotas where four men are held in stone.

While driving along the Grand Canyon, don't talk on the phone.

Next head over to Las Vegas where you could win some money.

Be careful though because if you lose it, it won't be funny.

If you head to California you can catch some waves and surf,

After that, go watch a football game on the turf.

Next go play in the ocean in the sun,

But wait! You're not done.

Lastly, go take a boat to the ocean at night and fish

If you're lucky you might see a shooting star, then make a wish.

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joshua marshjj24

I wrote this for a class two years ago and my teacher loved it.

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