Unnoticed

Wed, 09/11/2013 - 00:22 -- BJinx

Too early is the time she wakes up,

just to do countless hours of hair and make-up.

Hunger exist in her world of perfection.

Not realizing that he pays her no attention,

he's too busy with her friend,

the one who promised that they'd be friends til the end.

This friend didn't realize the end would come soon.,

until she read the text:

"My body feels numb."

The girl she betrayed popped too many pills.

So many she began to feel ill.

The next day at school, she received all the attention,

but she wasn't there to witness it...might I mention?

She was on TV.

Reporters talking to her parents..grieving.

She took her life. 

All because of the never ending strife.

All a result of being...

Unnoticed.

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