Unlocked LIfe

Thu, 06/20/2013 - 16:48 -- retsu

Death holds a set of keys

One each for you and me

Locked within this earthly basket

The keys unlock the casket

Leading to a hallowed destination

Each soul has a constellation

As the freed souls call

Death unlocks the casket

For death’s keys hold us all

Comments

RebeccaYSPerez

10 years ago

Thank you Retsu for posting this poem. It's short but it hits home easily and without apology. My favorite line would definitely have to be "Each soul has a constellation;" it's a very beautiful line.

Rebecca

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