The Unknown Oasis of Life

Location

The sun may rise
And set
The day goes on
Until another day is met
Stars you see
Are there to stay
Till it is time to drift away
An unknown oasis
Undermines your ideals
Earth what you make of it
Thoughts and choices in for demand
Only feeling your toes 
Your feet in the sand
Physical qualities
What you see and know
Only some
Which are left to show
You are born 
An empty page
Living your life 
Choices made
An unknown boundary
Wrenching in your gut
You know and feel
That it is all so real
But physically
There is no understanding
The entire ordeal

Comments

blondette007

Interesting view of the idea of life.

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