Unawaken

she walks with steps of gloom
everything is blurry when she enters a room
her eyes burn with sadness
as she fades off into blackness
she asks herself to stay strong
but she's getting tired and she knows it's wrong
all these things she fears
fall from her cheek kinda like tears
she lays in her bed and tries to get through
as it remains around like a tattoo
everything seems so stale
and her face is looking kinda pale
simple thoughts surround her mind
her eyes are drifting almost blind
she closes her eyes and tries to catch some sleep
but she doesn't awake her heart was too weak.

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savigirl14

Powerful poem but truly amazing. I love how much emotion you put into this poem. Keep writing and I love your hair. Please read my poems and tell me what you think.

Vidman97

Wow. *blown away*

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