Two Worlds

Two worlds you can walk

Don't wait

Straddle the line between fallacy and reality

The sun never shines through to you

Your face is the mist

Clinging to the air of surreality

Obscuring the road ahead

The road to genuity

Sometimes I can't tell

If you are blind or I

You live an illusion, a trick of the eye

 

~(9/19/14)

Whoa Jaz, bizarre much? This is a little activity I like doing to see where my mind goes. It's a 100% freewritten poem. I didn't stop to think what was coming out or edit a single word. I do this because the first thoughts on your paper are always the most honest and it's interesting to see what happens. My mind apparently went to the fact that I live a happy facade day by day but am truly sad on the inside. So, this is what my poetry looks like before all editing. :)

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