The tunnel to perfection (le tunnel à la perfection)

I diligently seeked out a secret

through a tunnel of life

i seeked and seeked

until the wind of holiness

took me to the kingdom of Philippians

state two(2),street one (1),house no three(3)

 

and  i looked at the beautiful house

and it was written on it

"...let each esteem other better than themselves...."

wooh!

 

this was not what i was taught in the university

so i refused to enter the house

nor reside there in

a scholar like me

with high degrees

and with a royalblood

esteem others above me

never!

 

but if this is real

then the world will be a better place

can the rich esteem the poor more than himself ?

that will be easier for a Camel to pass through the eye of a needle

than the rich to esteem the poor more than himself

 

then I noticed that this was the principle Jesus Christ followed

He esteemed me more than himself

so he laid his life down for me

hmmm what an extraordinary man

so i enetered the house

and it was made of peace ,joy and long life

and more things i cant just mention

all i could say was thank you Jesus

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