Treat You Better

Fri, 10/21/2016 - 11:34 -- DjGamer

The wind is blowing

cuts like knives throuw my soul

This pain in my heart

hurts more than the world will know


Voices in my head

whisper light as a feather

It'll take a little time

for them to treat you better


How long do I have to wait

for the torment to subside

I can't take much more

of the pain rooted in my mind


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