Mon, 07/15/2013 - 18:46 -- z.oetry

I always became a certain way when I heard a distancing train.

It took away the love in my body and left me with disdain.

The hollow sound filled my heart while lonely thoughts scoured my brain.


But I would look in your eyes and would no longer feel that pain.

Because your love would cover me and excite me like rain.

It would fill me with warmth and give me happiness I can't explain.


Now time has passed and we are different

Because when I look in your eyes

I feel something familiar.

I hear the hollow sounds. 

I think the lonely thoughts.

That I could only attain

When I would hear a distancing train.


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