Torn Apart (My first Etheree Experiment Poem)

Sat, 02/20/2016 - 16:11 -- frpass


Is what

I hear now

For it is you

That becon's me Dear

For it is you, I hear

So what if you yell and scream

Who are you to tell me, that Dear

You were never near tearing my heart

Teary eyes, crows fly, we die, torn apart!


Authors notes: I am learning all forms of poetry in online classes this is what they call Etheree Experiments it starts out 1-10 syllables each line ending with 10 line being 10.

So this is my first one of that form and it was spur of the moment poetry!

This poem is about: 
My family
My community
My country
Our world


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