Till you have accomplished you

Till you have accomplished you have to strive,Summers have passed now it's winter time,Do hard work and maintain focus,and then you will see yourself in a locus,Do remember I'm here by your side,so don't lose yourself till the temp rise,Think twice before taking any action,then you will see yourself in satisfaction,Sometimes burden will hire all your mind,for you are determined,and the situation will get out of mind,but you don't have to lose your pride,caz fog will disappear and the sun will shine,Since the paths are known and destination too,For sun in day and moon in night,and you will see yourself shinning all day and night. *zAkI*

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