Them Feels (Fear or Hope)

Sun, 06/22/2014 - 23:10 -- Dondix1


You're FEELING too much

You're way OVERsensitive

This isn't JEN from the Block

This is ME my own critic

Nothing's set in STONE

Till the day AFTER you deaded

My will is stronger than EVER

My DOUBTS is thriving and living

Cower inside of me BOY

MAN on the outside, exteriors

Putting FEAR in the mirror

And HOPE on the steering wheel


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