Teens Of America

Location

60644
United States
41° 52' 58.1844" N, 87° 45' 6.228" W

We're out having an awesome time then something goes wrong so we the teens out here feeling strong and find out that the homeless aren't so well as the teens of america we have to gather food before the shelter starves so here we stand up and defend because we're the teens of america don't worry stay strong and remember to keep the hope alive and believe that you will be saved and fed god bless you all from the teens of america

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Poetry Phamtom

Help Out

RebeccaYSPerez

This poem is a great call to help out to all teens. We are young but we must remember when those in need, need a helping hand, they need a lot more help. We will be citizens one day and we need to be active and we need to remeber that. 

Fixing the structure will probably help the flow of the words, but otherwise it is a great poem! What service have you done thus far in 2013?

Becca.

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