The Tears

If i could change anything

I'd make it change everything

nothing would be the same

but it would take a lot of shame

 

If i could change one thing

i would make it so

everytime someone died

an unjust death

that everyone on earth

would cry a river of tears

 

if everyone cried

when somebody died

we'd all feel the shame

of those unfair deaths

it'd never be the same

it would change everything

with the change of just one thing

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Grant-Grey Porter Hawk Guda

Powerful expression! Please never stop expressing from the heart. Continue the journey of poetry. 

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