Take Me Down


United States
38° 36' 4.9176" N, 82° 1' 47.334" W

Take Me Down


Take me down to the deepest parts of you..

I want to know much more than the simple fact,

That your eyes are blue…


Take me down to heaven, where we both will tremble.

I want to share all my darkest secrets in hopes,

That you’ll share some too…


Take me down to places unknown to anyone else…

I want to feel all the pain and sorrow and happiness,

That makes you yourself….


Take me down to where you hide away from the rest….

I want to know all of the dreams and hopes and fears,

That you think are best left unsaid...


Take me down with you, as you fall from grace….

I want to be there even as you’re doomed and tarnished,

That way you’ll know I’ll never stray….



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