Take a bow

And to you I should take a bow....
Why? In detail Let me explain now:
You have brought me to the land that I used to know,to that seed That I once would sow.
a bitter place I used to call home sweet home.
Congratulations
For you have brought me to the golden gates of depression.
But I shall not enter!
My mind is filled of determination
And I refuse to surrender
For years I battled and I finally won
And now how dare you try to rip open the scars that for years I've sown.
You have tried to break me open
But I have buried it all in the depths of the most secret place of my heart.
Locked away with the lost key they shall remain there hanging like a pice of art.
There is no regret,for it wasn't my fault.
Fate decided to bring pain
Heartbreak,loneliness and acid rain
But now I've changed that tempest to sunshine and rainbows
And take a good look at me!
Take a mental photograph of my smile for it shall remain forever
I cannot be broken,I can't even crack,for I have gone down to the pits of hell and back.
To you I SHOULD bow
But I won't, and sorry if that brings to you sorrow.
But I am an unstoppable force you cannot change my ways
strong and firm
I can never be tamed.
You can't break me
you can't even phase me.
So please just let me be
Let go,for I choose to be free.

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