swimming

You must love to watch me cry
because since the beginning
that’s all you have caused me,
tears and breathless sobs
and i sit here as these big drops
of sadness and despair
crash like waves onto my face
and wonder if maybe,
maybe one day all my cries 
will pay off and we can 
swim forever in an ocean of feelings.

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

emotionally driven

genuine and passionate piece

powerful.imani

SPEECHLESS 

this poem used so much creativity that it just shows how you been feeling and how many times you have cried. That it creates an ocean and the ending just left me with my mouth open speechless such a amazing,outstanding writer . Keep up the good work 

Once again i can relate but sometimes crying over a person who cause you so much pain sometimes i wish people could really see what they say and do can really hurt someone . Dry your eyes "because every little thing is gonna be alright " keep your head up !!

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