Suicide ain't a solution
When life seems all hopeless. still don't you loose all scope of hope for there's this thing dangling in the air. Reach out for God's sturdy rope.
For how
sure can
you be
that
death will take you to a better fate
What if
you are
plunged
into a
plight
much
worse
where
there's no turning back at any rate!
In times of trials and tribulations invoke Him
Or your chances of contentment remain slim
You too haven't been infallible and above all blame, that you wish for a perfect rosy life The excuses for suicide are usually so lame, Better enjoy your share even so in strife.
Donot friend, plan to commit this act
just to invoke another's pity and regret
The pity and regret will come and go
Besides it soothes no decomposed
and a large slice of your life may go wasted.
Why rush for thy grave, for greater gloom
Suicide's ain't a way out fellow human friend
Pray a godless way not send you unto this doom
You haven't right to bring any life to its end.
And it's probable that all those years
that you now wish to recklessly discard in dust
have something bright ahead, got to be a ray of hope
Extinguish it not if in God you trust!
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Don't be too critical of your style of poetry
One can always adjust and modify in itself
The poem is powerfully prolific
It speaks about the importance of valuing life
We all go through trials, but it's essential to have Jesus in and with us throughout our spiritual walk.
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You are an amazing poet
Jesus is God
He is the right hand in God's throne
Holy trinity is father, son & Holy spirit
It's amazing on deepening a relationship with our Father
The reason people find it hard to believe that Jesus is God is fearful of truth.
The bible tells the truth no matter what time and year
Jesus fulfill God's prophecy, read the bible. Read John 3:16
What you are is your choice, no one doesn't have any right to judge. What I ask is read the bible,and seek truth
Ask for God to reveal himself to you and show you who He really is.
God bless you
One thing for sure is that people need to know the truth
The truth is in The bible
Hey! I agree. Suicide is horrible thing. Satan uses depression and sin and sin to drag hopeless people to an evil eternity. Christ is a God of eternal life, not of eternal death, and is a God of greater life on Earth. I enjoyed this poem a lot. I'm glad it was on your heart, and I hope God uses this to speak to people.
That was a beauiful poem. I enjoyed it and feel like it
spoke quite a few truths. There is a song we sing at my church that says
"weeping may endure for a night but joy comes in the morning light"
I feel that your poem encompesses that song verse. Keep writing and never stop.
be blessed and encouraged.
YulizaZielinski.
I like to say tht I rapped my way throught the poem.
I liked the message you brought across.
And the way you showed a little bit of your religion.
Great job
-jules
yasmin argueta
this is a beautiful poem, I really enjoyed reading.
I feel the emotion behind it, your poem is beautifully
well written. keep up the amazing work.