Suicide ain't a solution

 When life seems all hopeless.    still don't you loose all scope    of hope              for there's this thing dangling in the air.               Reach out for God's sturdy rope.

 

For how 
sure can 
you be 
that

death will take you to a better fate

What if 
you are 
plunged 
into a 
plight 
much 
worse 

where 

there's no turning back at any rate!

 

In times of trials and tribulations invoke Him

Or your chances of contentment remain slim

 

You too haven't been infallible and above all blame,            that you wish for a perfect rosy life   The excuses for suicide are usually so lame,                     Better enjoy your share even so in strife.

 

Donot friend, plan to commit this act 

just to invoke another's pity and regret

The pity and regret will come and go

Besides it soothes no decomposed

and a large slice of your life may go wasted.

 

Why rush for thy grave, for greater gloom

Suicide's ain't a way out fellow human friend

Pray a godless way not send you unto this doom

You haven't right to bring any life to its end.

 

And it's probable that all those years 

that you now wish to recklessly discard in dust

have something bright ahead, got to be a ray of hope

Extinguish it not if in God you trust!

 

Comments

S.zaynab.k

The poems first stanza and 4th are not formatting properly ah. Sth wrong with how I'm using this sites formatting.

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

Don't be too critical of your style of poetry
One can always adjust and modify in itself

The poem is powerfully prolific
It speaks about the importance of valuing life
We all go through trials, but it's essential to have Jesus in and with us throughout our spiritual walk.

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S.zaynab.k

Thanx so much for feedback. Yes I believe in both Jesus and God even if I don't believe Jesus to be God. 

Thanx for the invite to your great group. Will try to join.

cheers.

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

Jesus is God
He is the right hand in God's throne
Holy trinity is father, son & Holy spirit
It's amazing on deepening a relationship with our Father

S.zaynab.k

Well not everybody believes that. Find that too hard to believe anyway. Is very confusing, to say he is God and then the right hand of God and both a father and a son of the same, Dan sorry very confusing. That's why I'm a Muslim. Much easier beliefs and very understandable u see Islam is.

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

The reason people find it hard to believe that Jesus is God is fearful of truth.
The bible tells the truth no matter what time and year
Jesus fulfill God's prophecy, read the bible. Read John 3:16
What you are is your choice, no one doesn't have any right to judge. What I ask is read the bible,and seek truth
Ask for God to reveal himself to you and show you who He really is.
God bless you

S.zaynab.k

Well not everybody believes that. Find that too hard to believe anyway. Is very confusing, to say he is God and then the right hand of God and both a father and a son of the same, Dan sorry very confusing. That's why I'm a Muslim. Much easier beliefs and very understandable u see Islam is.

MVP-Most Valuable Poet

One thing for sure is that people need to know the truth
The truth is in The bible

OnTheRebound

Hey! I agree. Suicide is horrible thing. Satan uses depression and sin and sin to drag hopeless people to an evil eternity. Christ is a God of eternal life, not of eternal death, and is a God of greater life on Earth. I enjoyed this poem a lot. I'm glad it was on your heart, and I hope God uses this to speak to people.

S.zaynab.k

Warmest thanx for comment even if I don't believe in mortal gods as Jesus. I only believe in the one immortal God, the one u call father.

J.T.Pandacorn

That was a beauiful poem. I enjoyed it and feel like it 

spoke quite a few truths. There is a song we sing at my church that says

"weeping may endure for a night but joy comes in the morning light"

I feel that your poem encompesses that song verse.  Keep writing and never stop.

be blessed and encouraged.

S.zaynab.k

Warmest thanx for feedback. That song line is lovely . Take care.

kelseyxwebb

i love this. 

S.zaynab.k

Warm thanx for the comment, real quiet here, not many his and hellos I see.

YulizaZielinski.

I like to say tht I rapped my way throught the poem.

I liked the message you brought across.

And the way you showed a little bit of your religion.

Great job 

-jules

S.zaynab.k

Warm thanx for rapping it. I dig your comment.

yasmin argueta

this is a beautiful poem, I really enjoyed reading. 

I feel the emotion behind it, your poem is beautifully 

well written. keep up the amazing work.

 

Liek

this a really beautiful poem!

I get in tears, but suicide is a solution.. for me

S.zaynab.k

Oh nooohhh dear suicide is far painful than any worldly pain. Just pray to the one true God and u will feel better. It really helped me to pray when I was suicidal years back.

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