Succeed

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92405
United States
34° 8' 24.7344" N, 117° 17' 49.2108" W

Oneday i will be the version of myself. Stand above the odds. A page in a history book, No longer on the shelf. Currently i am climbing. Looking for purpose to be Shining. No switch to my light, Forever burning until I'm Dying. Oneday i will look death in the face and say "No, Not Today". Today i Learn, today i yearn, today i am the best no longer third. Oneday, i will succeed.

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MVP-Most Valuable Poet

one day will be some day
always keep driving to be the absolute best
your poems reflects your struggles as well as ways to achieve greater
you will succeed, always have faith, hope, and belief
keep writing my brother
i'm a power poetry mentor-check out some of my poems

Mickeyy101

Appreciate your outlook on my art. Glad someone gets it.

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