The storm of emotions

Thu, 07/24/2014 - 14:11 -- omankeh

Location

190 Hempstead Gardens
Hempstead Gardens
United States
40° 41' 41.676" N, 73° 38' 46.356" W

Whoosh!!!!Wash!!!Bang,Bang,Bang!!

That's all I hear, as I think "dang"!

I feel it, I taste it, and I hear the gang!

The annoying one of the group, shyness,

turns out to be the strongest.

 But really it's timing is the finest,

You don't need to be hit to know it's a pest.

All these emotions swirl in my head when I need a rest,

and when I see her I'm unable to confess.

They hurt me, heal me, and then send me back out,

But even though they leave me to pout,

They help teach me what love is all about.

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